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PostSubject: Oni Oni no Mi : Model Imp   Tue May 09, 2017 3:48 am

Name: Oni Oni no Mi, Model: Imp (Demon Demon Fruit, Model: Imp)

Capabilities: Grants the user to turn into an imp. Allows the user to generate a small fistfuls of fire that they can throw and/or can teleport short distances every so often. However, The use of instantaneous movement causes great strain on the users body and repeated use without rest causes wear on the body and leaves a faint cloud of smoke upon disappearing and reappearance. The nature of the fruit also starves the user for need of attention from other beings then itself or else the power diminishes.

The form of the imp varies from users. Their skin turns grey, green, red or black. Their body will shrink down, leaving them at most 2 feet in height. Their body may grow other features such as short horns, hair or stone on arms and legs, claw like hands, animalistic or an elongated face, and sharp teeth. If the user had wings at one point, they would become bat-like. Some effects of the imp may show up on the user such as teeth or (if they previously had it) wings.

Power limits in post: Teleportation has many set drawbacks. The user can only teleport within a 5 meter radius of their origin, this distance cannot be expanded. It requires a set up post (Finding a location and focus) and action post (the dodge) to enact, and it cannot be used again until the user posts three more times due to fatigue (This time increases by one post with every time the user teleports unless given a long rest period in story). While it may seem easy and cheap in battle, the sudden shift in movement does not do the body good; It causes nauseous feeling and headaches to the user that get worse with each use, still hurting the user (Can be lessened with experience, but the 'shift sickness' will never go away). The user is given one second of freedom between where they disappear and reappear, both locations marked easily with a brimstone smelling haze.

Also, While the user may be able to throw fire. They are not immune to fire except for their hands. So the user will be able to pick up dangerous hot items but still runs the risk of burning the rest of their body.

Fruit Appearance: A black pear with a tall neck, Swirls seem to overlap it like scales in design


Last edited by Storm on Tue May 09, 2017 12:10 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Explained power limits of the fruit, added extra feature list)
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PostSubject: Re: Oni Oni no Mi : Model Imp   Tue May 09, 2017 4:26 am

Give a specific limit on how far and how many times the user of the fruit is able to teleport. I'd also like to see a set number of posts dedicated to preparation before the user is able to teleport.

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PostSubject: Re: Oni Oni no Mi : Model Imp   Tue May 09, 2017 12:18 pm

Added some more info and explanation to how teleport should work. It is not an easy out, Still a dodge that is required to be explained and has a toll to it. A quick list to checkmark:

> If the user teleports in a fight, they must have set up and then the action. If they are being struck after set up, they can use action to dodge. If they are being struck before they can set up, they can not teleport.
> In a fight, user must post three times before the can use this ability again. This increases by one for each time they teleport in a battle. This does not reset unless a long enough time that counts as 'hours' passes
> Users may dodge attacks, but will still suffer from 'shift sickness'. The experience of a user may lessen the effects, but should still feel nauseous or have a headache to some degree after teleporting.
> User is limited to 5 meters or 16 feet of 'poofing' distance. This isn't some masterful way of getting around.
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PostSubject: Re: Oni Oni no Mi : Model Imp   Tue May 09, 2017 4:13 pm

Not only I am impressed with the added limitations I'm impressed at the over all improvement of quality and detail.  I expect great things from you in the future.  


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PostSubject: Re: Oni Oni no Mi : Model Imp   Tue May 09, 2017 4:38 pm

Thank you, I have had some suggestions on how to modify. But I can look into that later and discuss further changes with how to balance it out if needed.
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