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PostSubject: Falons ' Sword of Chaos: Bloodletter' & 'Sword of Peace: Tranquil'   Mon Jan 20, 2014 10:59 pm

Weapon names: Sword of Chaos: Bloodletter and Tranquil.

Description: Bloodletter is a long katana forged by Nikolo Moori a smith that lived on the mountain near Falons village, it's hilt is a copper colored dragon head that has small flames exiting its mouth, the grip has red and black wrappings around it for better grip and for added security a hand guard was made with th appearance of a bar running from thinly to the pommel, tiny spikes spaces out evenly on it. The hilt has a special engravement that looks like a planet exploding and the blade coming from the ruins, the blade is that of a standard katana but with a saw like structure near the bottom and fullers on both sides before the tip of the blade curves a little upward.

Description:Tranquil was forged by the same smith but it was the opposite to Bloodletter, this blade had a pommel of gold in the shape of a dove with a plant in its mouth and a blue gem in the center, the grip is wrapped in blue and white wrappings for increased grip. The hilt is a strange design one end of it curving back to act as some form of hand guard with a protective shield like design, the other curving forwar above the blade slightly, this was also colored gold. The blade is inwardly (like that of a Gurka blade) and is slightly shorter than Bloodletter and has a fuller on both sides. It's key feature however is its ability to block an attack with the shield, although small it can take quite the hit.

Weapon special ability: None recognized yet.

History: The Swords Bloodletter and Tranquil are swords that were crafted  long before Falons (my future character) time by a 'legendary smith' whom the villagers used to call the mountain dweller. Long ago there were two brothers, Brawn and Fawn, whome each requested a sword. Brawn was the fiercer brother and fawn was the more peaceful and usually they were at odds for some reason or another. On the day the swords were completed the smith gave Brawn The Sword Of Chaos and he dubbed it 'Bloodletter'. The smith gifted Fawn The Sword of Peace and named it 'Tranquil'. When the brothers received their swords they went their separate ways for years before one day returning to the village for different reasons, Brawn came to eradicate its people and make the Smith craft him a another sword. Fawn came to stop him. They arrived at the same time on te same day in the same place, fawn asked his brother to stop but he didn't and the fight commenced. The fight brought them to the top of the mountain where the smith had lived and was now deceased, to this the brothers didnt know and again fought, Fawn's sword did not allow a single attack threw but yet he couldn't launch one through his brothers attacks when finally his brother lost balance and Fawn stabbe him threw the chest. Brawn in his anger bit Fawns neck ripping it open. As the brothers lay dying they told each other of their past deeds, Brawn killed several hundred men and he said that each time he felt the sword get just a bit heavier as if their soul had entered it, Fawn saved many people and each time he said he thought he felt the sword get lighter as if the swor had given the saved another chance. They looked at each other and with what strength each both still possed then crawled to the smiths grave and pulled each other to their knees, shoving the swords into the rocks next to his grave unbenounced to the two their swords would be taken and used once agin by a young swordsman.


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PostSubject: Re: Falons ' Sword of Chaos: Bloodletter' & 'Sword of Peace: Tranquil'   Mon Jan 20, 2014 11:34 pm

The sword is not following the guidelines for Custom weapons, please use the sheet provided.

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PostSubject: Re: Falons ' Sword of Chaos: Bloodletter' & 'Sword of Peace: Tranquil'   Tue Jan 21, 2014 2:58 am

Everything seems fine except for the Special Abilities. How is the sharpness of the sword increased by the strenght? That doesnt make much sense. You should also explain the material the guard is made of, since 'it is said to be unbreakable' is pretty vague in my opinion.

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PostSubject: Re: Falons ' Sword of Chaos: Bloodletter' & 'Sword of Peace: Tranquil'   Thu Jan 23, 2014 11:22 pm

ahh umm, seeing that you fixed that,

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