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PostSubject: Legend Sword   Sat Dec 07, 2013 4:26 pm

Weapon name: Legend Sword

Description: This is a standard long sword that have a golden color it is about two or three inches longer than the average long sword. This sword also is very heavy and is about 1.5 tons heavy but the user swing it around like a regular sword those.

Weapon special abilities:  This sword has the ability to explode on impact, and send shockwave.
Then  the blade is strong enough to withstand the blast of several attacks.
( Detail it directed the vibration of said any force then redirect it to the target in a form of a shockwave. These shockwave trigger a explosive device that is located in the center of the blade. Once the blade is hit transport the vibration to said center along the explosive to active cause the said shockwave to active too.  The explosive cause the target to feel the force of the attack the shockwave well you know what that does.
This weapon is similar to one piece cannon weapon instead it shockwave, and explosive can go as far as 45 feet in distance this can be modified to.)

History: (Optional) was a stole sword from the marines this said weapon is top secret due to it was still being modified no one know how they made it but it is famous none then less.


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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 7:11 am

Why does it have a different name than the thread's title? o.O
Also, these are 2 different weapons, so please post them separately.

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 9:37 am

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 10:17 am

One last thing, remove the reference to Krieg, and it should be fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 10:23 am

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 11:56 am

"explosive can go as far as 60 feet" You're saying that when your blade explodes the explosion can go up to 60 meters away?!?! How is the blade not even damaged by that, even if you say it is "strong enough" it doesnt make much sense, because the blade would be severely damaged by each of the explosions (if they are so big).

I'll accept this if you can make it that the explosion is localized, and also, wouldnt the user of the sword be damaged by this explosion as well?

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 3:10 pm

Ro-sama, he mentioned feet so that would be .. hmm, 20 meters radius should still be a bit too much, eh?

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:17 pm

Why would the sword be damage by it own attack? Come on now this is basic of kreig weapon his weapon was not damage why does mine have to be? Also the attack don't go off in the way the user used it there no recoil.
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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:38 pm

Bump for review again.
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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Sun Dec 08, 2013 11:15 pm

Anfernee001 wrote:
Why would the sword be damage by it own attack? Come on now this is basic of kreig weapon his weapon was not damage why does mine have to be?
This weapon looks like a copy of Don Kreig's weapon. Which, by the way, probably didnt suffer from the explosion because it was supposed to weight 1 ton. Heavier metals indicated a much higher density, which would make up for the explosions. But that's not the point, a 20 meter explosion is a bit excessive.


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Also the attack don't go off in the way the user used it there no recoil.
Explain this, it doesnt make sense that a 20 meter explosion doesnt hurt it's user if it is supposed to be activated in contact.

On another note, you cannot post a "bump" 10 MINUTES after you posted your comment. Sometimes Admins and Mods are not on or are busy doing something else.

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Mon Dec 09, 2013 6:37 am

There lower the distance made the weapon help so the user will not take recoil damage.

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Mon Dec 09, 2013 10:05 pm

comment from Aid, with love;

If it is a standard long sword, a 45 feet explosion would be a little over 9 times the distance from the user, meaning it would STILL hurt the user too.

You said you can adjust the explosion... How? How do you change the strength of the explosion? Do you add/take gunpowder? Do you have a computer mechanism that auto-tunes it?

Stop posting "bump for review". If after a day or two no one has replied, there is a thread for bumping. You only bump for review if it was a WIP or previously approved profile and now need it approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Tue Dec 10, 2013 7:41 am

This is taking way to long to get one weapon approve this weapon is base off the spear. Okay so umm I went into the detail as best as I Can the sword have a center piece which house the explosive I don't know what else to say. It don't effect the user because it doesn't go off in his direction it only goes north, west, and east. So yea I can modified the explosive threw rp meaning I can make it go farer.
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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Tue Dec 10, 2013 5:26 pm

If I may, can I create a post, or sent Anfer-san a message with a post, of this weapon in a more balanced and acceptable way?

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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Tue Dec 10, 2013 6:39 pm

Sure whatever.
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PostSubject: Re: Legend Sword   Tue Dec 10, 2013 9:54 pm

Please do, Shadow.

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