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PostSubject: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 10:19 am

Name: Creed, Von Don

Age: 23

Bounty: 0

Species: Human .

Occupation: Captain

Allegiance: Pirate/Revolutionaries(Legion)

Home Village/Ocean: West Blue

Appearance: Creed Von Don is a tall skinny, muscular man, with no face hair his face is like he is baby face, even those his hair is short and spikey.
The most notable aspect of Creed's appearance is his yellowish wootz steel armor, which is veil brown -lined like the rest of his attire. Consisting of a chest plate, shoulder guards, and elbow guards, it is Creed's main offense and defense against his foes. It is loaded with a variety of weapons. His Jolly Roger is painted on the chest plate ,and belt buckle. Under that, he has a black t-shirt, and his hands are covered by a pair of black leather gloves. He has a black gas mask somewhere inside the armor, to prevent his deadly poison gas from affecting him.  He is about 7 feet, and wear purple pants to along with black glasses shoes to.


History:

Once Upon time

Creed was a young spoil boy his dad had brought his son just about everything he wanted. Creed want to rule the grand line in hopes taking over it with his mass armada. At the age of 10 Creed was on the fast track to make himself stronger in  fact his father made sure that only the best training for his son he made sure he focus on his son strength, and agility since those was the keen thing he would need to win in the battle along with endurance to.

13 Year Later
Throughout the 13 years of his training his father built his son a Vass ship collection giving his son 2 ship to command with 2 crew for him to take in command of. Creed was giving one last thing before he left his father side to travel the world, and head to the grand line he was given a special armor that was called Wootz Steel this armor said to withstand several melee attacks from a devil fruit user with ease, and not fall apart. It was paint yellowish due it was Creed favor color, and his jolly roger subject to that color basic to. Creed set sail in hopes of ruling the sea as a king his first goal is to attack any marine who dare challenge him this mean he usually treats his target then pretend to be something he is not like having his ship look like a marine ship but it is not those Creed is very smart his father died which gave Creed the last remaining 40 million beli to him as his inherit he currently travel the blue hoping to keep his promise to his father to become something more than life himself.

The Blame
He later blame the death of his father on the marine shoulder saying it was there fought that his father house or mansion was attack by some pirates.
Then the marines came to see what happen only to arrive late ,and therefore that why he blame the whole government for that very fact it self he hope to rid the world of any marines ,and the world government as a whole.

Personality:
He is incapable of any sense of honor nor can he spare sympathy for anyone.
Creed is characterized by cruelty, dishonesty and arrogance. He is confident in his own superiority, despite any failures he might experience, and believes wholeheartedly that his armada and arsenal of weapons can overcome any foe. Even in the face of his obvious inferiority, Creed refused to accept or learn from his mistake, instead turning to underhanded methods to get by and believing that there was some sort of trick to overcoming such foes. However, his constant victories, and reliance on weapons and odds made him overconfident. His superiority complex makes it very easily for him to lose his temper if his orders are not fulfilled.  Creed is what we give a pirate a bad name this probably why he would destroyed or be destroyed.


Ship: Legion

Ship Flag: Several Yellow ship in the background .

Devil Fruit: Limited to only three devil fruit users per person
Type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
Effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)

Special Abilities:
**Mass Strength: Due to his armor being so heavy he have to have a great strength to lift up his upper body ,and fight his target his legs ,and his upper body strength is quite powerful making him a great melee fighter too.

**Keen Reflex: His reflex rival an Soru user one that is on the level of an average Soru user.


Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):(All attacks can be used 4 times a battle expect the Long Sword)

Legend Sword: The pattern across the sword is coated with explosive powder which, in tandem with a small mechanism located in the interior with the handle, along with a system of small circuits located within the blade itself (hence it's wider and thicker frame) that reach to the zing-sag pattern, allow the blade to generate small, yet dangerous explosions. The explosions are merely a meter-radius wide on average, however, combined with a possible slash, allow for significant damage to the one slashed by said blade. The compressed blade is powerful enough to absorb the shock. Also, there is a small button on the handle, concealed by a small, silver cover. By pressing on that, the user is capable of generating a one-time, 6 meter radius explosion upon impact, however this leaves the user damaged as well, and also carries the risk of potentially damaging the blade. Also, if this special move is utilized, the entire supply of the powder is used up, thus the user can no longer use explosive slashes, until he replenishes the powder, which can be done from a small, covered, opening at the bottom of the handle.

Fire: He fire his flamethrower at an target then release a long line of flame produce by the fire item to shoot up to 60 feet in one direction. This weapon run out after three post too if the target is hit they may receive second to third degree burns too depends those.

Kaboo: A bomb glass bottle which containing an extremely potent deadly poison gas  from black window spider.  Creed toss this gas as he have it located somewhere in his Vass armor. It creates a very large cloud of poison upon impact, and the gas is usually fatal to those without a gas mask. It cover 100 feet in all direction even as sniff can be lethal it started to paralyzed  you then you are unable to focus then dizziness then light head to become sick until you are knock out. Within 5 turn of being effect this poison can be harmful, and may subject you to if not heal within time.

Shuriken Storm: Shuriken that Creed fires out of his shoulder-plates in a machine gun-like fashion, capable of skewering wood, flesh, and dent iron. He shoot about 100 in each shoulder plate ,and half of them are poison too.

Dagan : Creed flips open the mantles on his armor to reveal 10 gun barrels, then takes out two dual-pistols and proceeds to pump the enemy's body full of lead. His large ammo supply and rapid firing rate enable Krieg to fire about 14 rounds in a second he can used this attack 4 times in a battle to.

Bomb: Tiny bombs that explode on contact with anything (even water). Despite being strong enough alone, they are usually thrown in masses.(Up to 6 of them)

Cape of hope: He wear a cape with yellow shield pattern with several spike attract to it. This  cape is post to be fire proof along with water proof ,and can withstand several melee attacks due to it iron spikes.


Weapons/Items: Wootz Armor(This armor include poison darts,  10 pistols, Shuriken, poison gas, bombs, cape of hope, and wrist arm flamethrower.)
Legend Sword

Character Flaws: He can't stand a joke he hate when people smile or smirk that piss him off more too.

Goals: To kill as many marine as possible. Try to remove the world government from power too.[/b]


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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 10:20 am

Bump for review.
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:08 pm

change the colour , and the attacks, use some original attacks.

Overall remove and change the appearance
then change the attacks completely as all of them are the exact same as Don Krieg
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:44 pm

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Fri Dec 13, 2013 8:46 pm

i once again have to stress that this character looks , acts and has too much of the same weapons like don krieg, your sword hasnt even been approved yet either so....
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Fri Dec 13, 2013 8:53 pm

I need a admin to approve it too. And I fix his appearance too.
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sat Dec 14, 2013 9:32 am

His weapons have been approve need admin to review please.
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sat Dec 14, 2013 7:29 pm

Bump for character review please.
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PostSubject: Re: Creed, Von Don(Legion)   Sun Dec 15, 2013 3:17 pm

quite honestly, usually i would not allow this sort of application, but the thing that matters here is that you made changes and you listened to the administration, i would like to highlight however, that if any of your future apps are copies of any characters from one piece or any other universe, i will not allow it to be approved... for now, until another admin or mod steps in to oppose this

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