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PostSubject: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jun 30, 2013 4:56 am

Name: Arron E. Brekkett

Age:24

Bounty: 6,505,000 belli

Species: Human

Occupation: Thief, fighter
Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: East Blue

Appearance: Arron stands 6'8 at 194 lbs, his hair is short cut into a fauxhawk, pitch black up to a blonde tuft at the tip. he has 2 gold rings in his right ear and a small charm in the left that says "courage", he has a short beard down to his chin going over it as a triangle, no hair on his upper lip, he wears a half body jacket colored a dark red, usually with the collar up. 3 cigars are on the inside lip of his coat. Attached to his right shoulder is a leather shoulder guard with leather tassels with small circular metal pieces attached to the ends, his coat is halfway buttoned with a X shaped strap over-top to hold his leather shoulder protector up and one of his two pistol holsters. Bright green eyes adorn his face.

Arron has an intricate line tattoo under his right eye and another down his right arm, on his left arm is a skull with blade like designs around it usually over his left hand is a fingerless glove. on his right hand is a leather glove with his metal claw over-top, also fingerless. he has tight muscles with lightly tanned skin. His lower body is adorned by Grey pants and black boots. Over his chest, a few inches below his neck is a small scar from a sword slash and to the left of the tattoo on his arm is a scar from a gunshot (im going to add a picture also)

History: Arron was born into a poor family, from birth he was raised in a tough environment, his father was a janitor for a marine base and was regularly ridiculed, he then would come home and abuse his mother and him. When he was 15 he beat up his father and ran away, his mother was killed in his father’s frustration.

Arron worked at a bar as a cleaner in exchange for a room and meals, after he turned 18 he became hired muscle for the bar, frequently getting into scraps with drunks he accumulated muscle, and when he sided with someone over a matter he received some lessons, swordsmanship, marksmanship, and thievery.

At the age of 20 he set out to begin working for people as a merc, frequently getting into scraps with the government he received a bounty on his head for 5,000 belli, it was also along these journeys he received the Swift Swift Fruit, at first he just thought it was a strange fruit so he didn’t quite pay attention to it, but after gaining an atrocious appetite and being able to move so much faster than everyone else that he realized it was a devils fruit.

While working for a smuggler Arron had the opportunity to visit a small dojo, they seemed friendly enough so he sat and watched as they trained taking it in, later that night they were sneaking with small crates threw the town to a bandits stronghold on the far side. They snuck in threw a old mining tunnel but along the way Arron got a piece of his jacket stuck on a nail," hey you guys go on ahead, ill be right there" he whispered/ yelled, the one closest to him nodded and they continued on. for the life of him he couldn't get unhooked, he tugged and toppled over the box breaking open in the torchlight sat a metal device, it looked important. He snatched it up and exited the other side, before he left he walked to a nearby gunsmith, just as a few of the smugglers were coming back threw, he tossed it into the shaft and shot it with one of his pistols.

over the course of the next four years he developed moves and abilities with his devil fruit and claw using them to his advantage whenever he could, eventually his boss pulled a heist and knocked Arron out, leaving him at the scene to take the blame, he woke up just as 10-11 pirates showed up with swords, and guns he sliced threw them with his claw and katana, after he looked back at the bloodbath he wiped a few specks of crimson liquid off his face, disengaged  his claw and ran to find the rest of the village he was at burning.

the pirates must have show up when he was out cold so he ran through the center of the village killing a pirate every now and then that got in his way until he arrived at the outskirts near the beach where a few people and a old ex marine were getting ready to leave, Arron jumped on board, when they reached a little farther out to sea Arron used the old marines spyglass to look at the ship, before he could speak an image of his former boss on the ship in a captains hat came into view, he lost it.

As quickly as Arron entered the water the ex marine grabbed him and hoisted him back on, Arron coughing up water decided to stay on board until they reached the next island. When they arrived Arron tagged along with the ex marine, his name was Erik, or at least that’s what he told him. The village they arrived at was underfoot of a group of  supposedly powerful bandits who came to town once a week to collect “taxes” Arron and the marine entered a tavern and sat down to get something to eat, about halfway through the meal the bandits walked in one shooting in the air a few times to get attention, the marine and Arron sat at the table unmoved by them and continued to eat while they spouted off about money, when they got to the marine he kindly said he had no money, ”what a joke” one of the bandits replied, another gripped the back of his head and slammed it into the table, about 5 bandits in all inside Arron stood brought his left hand up and grabbed the nearest bandit by the head and slammed it into the same table, breaking it.

He triggered his claw and shoved it by the neck of the next closest bandit and pulled a pistol from his belt with his now free hand, aiming at another, he calmly looked down at the unconscious bandit then back up, ”you bastard!” the farthest one slashed a katana at him, he quickly moved from in front to behind and stabbed him with the claw, pulling it back out he smiled, “you next” while looking at the others, one of them swung their club and Arron ducked before jamming the pistol under the bandits chin and firing it, shortly before the other swung another katana from behind, only this time the marine caught it with a discarded sword, Arron swung but before he could do anything the ex marine was shot in the neck by the 5th bandit, Arron sped up and jumped delivering a kick to the 4th bandit when he was stopped after the kick the 5th bandit had pulled his other pistol and shot Arron in the left arm, Arron sped at the man, lunged and punched his claw into him in a frenzy.

After the 5th bandit lay dead Arron knelt by the ex marine whom dies before his eyes after making him promise to make sure there were no more bandits to bother the people. After a full search of the town and some medical treatment arron killed a few more bandits before returning to what could be called the towns docks, he was giving a fishing boat some water and food to travel onward, as he set sail he waved back smiling, knowing the old marine was at piece, and that he had fulfilled his promise

Personality: Arron is a generally laid back person, smiling most of the time he has a happy aura about him. Although it is a cover up most of the time for what he actually feels, his father hating him, betrayal and deceit are hard to hide and he tends to like those who are strong. Though he will risk his own life for any of his friends and gladly take a large amount of harm to keep them safe. People who take the lazy route tend to get on his nerves and selfish arrogant bastards, who look down on everyone else (like the tenryubito) will meet his blade all the quicker. Arron won’t hesitate to offer help to someone who needs it, except if it

inconveniences him in times of emergencies, he also likes meeting other beings like giants, fish men, see new animals and explore in general so when there is an opportunity to go ashore and experience something most of the time you won’t be able to keep him on the ship. Most of his free time is spent either eating a snack, sleeping, training with one of his 4 weapons or thinking. When it comes to fighting Arron relys on instinct, strength and speed which makes him a sort of wild card, any number of tactics could be made from the combination.


Ship: n/a

Ship Flag: n/a

Devil Fruit: Swift Swift fruit ( http://shipoffools.wikia.com/wiki/Soku_Soku_no_Mi)
type: Parmecia
effect: The user is able to accelerate any part of their body to terminal velocity

Special Abilities:
Single sword style, two sword style, lock picking, pick pocketing.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):

1:General swordsmanship
2: General Marksmanship
3:Swift Punch- after moving getting a high speed Arron slams his fist into the opponent
4:Swift Snatch- Arron used his immense speed to pickpocket someone off the street or sometimes during fights
5: Swift kick- standard kick, enhanced by speed
6:Swift arrow- at great running speed Arron spearheads his opponent
7:Swift shot- after quickly moving Arron for just a few seconds slows down to use his pistol
8:Swift marriage- Arron moves quick enough to simulate afterimages to confuse people
9:Swift hook- while an enemy is fleeing Arron will dart up in front and bring his leg up to the opponents face, using both momentum's to his advantage.
10: Swift blade punch- After getting a running start Arron slams the fist with his claw weapon into the opponent and then triggers it, gouging the opponent
11: Swift Trick- Arron breaks his momentum to swing his katana at the upper half of their body, then accelerates to bring the claw up at an upward angle into the target hoping to catch them while ducking
12: Swift momentum- Arron races by an enemy several times, striking them.
13: Swift Cannon- Arron runs away from his opponent then runs back as fast as possible, building up more and more speed until finally striking with the tramendous power build up.


Weapons/Items:
Hidden claw- a gauntlet over his right arm that when activated brandishes 3 blades out of it like a claw. http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/t7391-kakushi-tsume

2 pistols- normal pistols in holsters at his sides

single katana- with a black pommel a red hilt and black cloth wrapped around the hilt and a red sheathe

Goals:
To amass riches, to gain renown as a pirate, find the man who betrayed him, and to find true nakama.


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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jun 30, 2013 11:05 am

Okay, the character looks pretty good, but I have a few things to point out.

1. When did he get his 5,000 belli bounty? That should be explained in the history.

2. As I see it after reading the history, his main weapon is the claw? Then the pistol and sword styles should be in a second plain and you should only have basic knowledge of them. This allows you to focus on a single weapon and develop a good style that you can fuse with your fruit. Also, you couldn't have developed one and two sword styles if you are focusing on using a complex weapon such as the claw to a greater extent, so I would ask you to please change it to basic swordsmanship.

3. Your fruit "Swift fruit", are you refering to the cannon Soku Soku no Mi? The speed fruit. http://shipoffools.wikia.com/wiki/Soku_Soku_no_Mi If so, I recommend you to add a link to it.

4. The gauntlet with blades (your claw) should be enlisted as a Custom Weapon. (It needs it's own template) Also, if it plays such an important role you should explain where you got it from in the history, because it is not a normal weapon.

Good job, just change those small things and you are done.

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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jun 30, 2013 1:40 pm

will do Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jun 30, 2013 5:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jun 30, 2013 6:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jul 21, 2013 12:03 am

upped his bounty
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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Sun Jul 28, 2013 7:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Fri Jun 19, 2015 8:59 am

Added some techniques
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PostSubject: Re: Arron E. Brekkett   Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:26 am

I have a few objections regarding the fruit. As the fruit isn't canon neither was made in the site, I want you to submit it so that it can be evaluated. Other than that, I am okay with the techniques you added. The char will be approved once the fruit is also approved. Thank you.

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