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PostSubject: Leopard D. Daul   Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:54 pm

Name- "The Prophet" Leopard D. Daul

Age-†25

Bounty- None

Species-†Human (Devil Fruit user)

Occupation- None

Allegiance- World Government

Home Village/Ocean-†East Blue

Appearance-†http://bangin.files.wordpress.com/2012/07/morepuri.jpg

History-Born in East Blue, Daul was raised by two ex-marines and very early on grew to respect the World Government and justice. At the age of ten his parents had members of the World Government come and take Daul away to train. From that point on Daul was given a strict training regimen. He was ordered to spar every morning and night for three hours at first with marines but when he hit the age of fifteen he started sparring with members of the World Government. For several years all he did was spar but when he was seventeen they started to send him on missions to deal with small groups of World Government resistance members. After one mission that he did particularly well on they decided to reward his efforts, at dinner they gave him a strange looking fruit. When he ate he immediately noticed how bad it had tasted but other than that he†hadn't†noticed anything strange. They told him it was a devils fruit and that it would give him amazing power he just had to learn to use it. One day while he was on a mission he had been surrounded by bandits who demanded all of his things. Without warning he had suddenly transformed into a lynx man. Surprised by this sudden change the bandits all rushed at him at once, all at once as if purely by instinct Daul jumped over them, got behind them, and took all of their legs out with on swift kick. Not thinking he ran straight to the group of fallen over bandits and began breaking each of their necks one by one. When he transformed back he wondered how he had acted so swiftly but stopped caring and moved on to complete his mission. He grew tired of doing simple missions however so he requested that he could go out and on his own to help marines that he found on his way while traveling. As he explored the seas he would kill and apprehend pirates, bandits, and others who would wish to do wrong. While he still received missions from the fellows up top and he still executed them to the letter. He traveled to many different places and met many different kinds of people. From the sea of clouds of Skypiea to the docks of Water 7 he explored far and wide bringing justice to lands and improving his skills. His nickname is The Prophet because one day he was given a mission to kill one of the priests of Skypiea and disguise himself as a priest to kill a God who had allied himself with pirates and bandits and others who would threaten the world government. Not only did he kill the God but he killed every priest under him and personally tracked down the pirate and bandit group that he was working with and killed them too. From that point on everyone taunted him by calling him prophet but after a while the name stuck and that's what he began to be known as. He was almost†executed under the orders of the world government for†disobedience and failing to complete a mission. The World Government had sent him out to Jaya one day to kill a dangerous criminal who the World Government could afford to keep alive, knowing how well Daul handled every other mission they had given him they figured that he would be the perfect person to send out on this mission. Daul, of course, accepted the mission and immediately left for Jaya to kill this criminal, but when he got there he could not find the criminal he could only see one woman all by herself. Curious to where the criminal could be Daul asked her if she knew anything about it and she told him that she was the criminal. He couldn't believe that his target was a woman after thinking for a long time he decided to let her go because he wouldn't kill a woman. He returned to the W.G. headquarters and told them what had happened, they were furious and were about to send him straight to Enies Lobby, but they were stopped when a highly respect member of the W.G. had reminded them how useful Daul had been in the past and how much of a waste it would be to simply kill him. Realizing that it would be a mistake they changed their minds and did not send Daul to prison for twenty years for his†disobedience.†


Personality-††Daul naturally acts on instincts making him utterly unpredictable. He tends to be calm and composed however when he gets angry he is uncontrollable. In his anger he becomes extremely cruel and ruthless, making sure that his prey doesn't get out alive. He is kind and respectful but believes very seriously in justice and will do almost anything to make sure that justice is served. He has two rules that he always keeps and they are never attack women or children no matter what even if you are ordered to. He likes to be cheerful when he can and loves to sing. Despite his job he won't go after pirates that haven't done anything wrong unless he is ordered otherwise. He enjoys reading and books and going to the library. He hates summer, spring, autumn, fall but loves winter due to the cold weather. Daul does not like it when it is hot out because he hates when his suit gets so hot that he sweats in it making it sticky and uncomfortable. When he finds it too cold he simply transforms into his hybrid form for the warmth of his fur. He purs when he is happy even if he is in his human form it has become more of a habit than a choice for him. Every now and then when someone makes him mad he will let out a faint hiss. He does not care for money or power he is more interested in people, their concerns, dreams, reactions to certain things, their history. He shows great interest in even the lowliest of humans but is especially interested in those who possess the devil's fruit like himself. Taken at a very young age he never had the chance to make any real friends so he doesn't know how to form a bond with someone and tends to be shun by normal folks for his lack of knowledge in personal affairs. He is not supposed to feel anything especially sadness, however he allowed himself to feel emotions so as not to lose his humanity completely so he understands a bit how people feel about his unresponsiveness to their problems.†


Ship-†Typical ship

Ship name- Unnamed

Devil Fruit-†Neko Neko no Mi: Model Lynx

Type- Zoan

Effect- Allows the user to transform into a lynx human hybrid or a full lynx

Special Abilities-

Transform into a Lynx human hybrid while in this form Daul has
- increased agility, speed and jumping ability
- slightly more strenght
- sharp hearing and eyesight
- less sensitive to cold

Transform into a full lynx while in this form Daul has

- highly increased agility, speed and jumping ability
- increased strenght
- extremely sharp hearing and eyesight
- can endure extremely cold temperatures
- good at sneaking up on people

Learned Techniques-

Prophetís Arm- Daul grabs Redemptionís chain and swings the blade at an incredible speed then throws it at an enemy as a ranged attack.

Prophetís Silence- Daul attempts to sneak up on his opponent and choke them with the chain of Redemption.

Bite- Whether in human, hybrid, or full lynx from Daul will sink his teeth into his opponent as hard as he can. Does little damage as a human, slightly more as a hybrid, and the most as a full lynx.

Weapons/Items- The prophets warglaives AKA Redemption- A crescent shaped warglaive with a red blade and a long black chain that wraps around Daulís arm.

Character Flaws- He acts almost completely on instinct so he doesnít think things through and will do what his instincts tell him leading him to do rash things.

While in hybrid form Daul is
- less intelligent than when in human form, more based on instincts
-very sensitive to light
-slightly smaller than when in human form

While in lynx form Daul is
- less intelligent than when in human form, almost only based on instincts
-very sensitive to light
-slightly smaller than when in human form
- can't wield weapons anymore
- might lose humanity entirely in extreme situations, and therefore not be able to tell apart friends and enemies


Goals- To one day become one of the CP9.


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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Thu Jun 13, 2013 5:25 pm

Expand history and personality a little bit (2 lines for history and around 3 lines for personality) and you are having my approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Sat Jun 15, 2013 10:55 am

Ok I will
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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Sat Jun 15, 2013 8:44 pm

By the way what do you mean by lines? Do you mean like paragraphs?
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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Mon Jun 17, 2013 5:14 am

I mean to make the paragraph of the personality and history section a little bit longer.

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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Mon Jun 17, 2013 10:28 am

OK I got it now thanks I'll get right to it
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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:37 pm

If this isn't long enough just let me know ok
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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:38 am

The length is very good for both sections. The only thing that I want you to change now is the last sentence cause probably you meant that they did not send him to the prison but instead you say they sent him. When that is edited, your char is going to be approved and ready to go Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Wed Jun 19, 2013 10:15 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Leopard D. Daul   Fri Jun 21, 2013 6:49 am

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