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PostSubject: fresh   Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:59 am

Name: Fresh Rorokji

Age: 16

Bounty: 13,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Pirate

Allegiance: Pirate.

Home Village/Ocean: West Blue

Appearance: Blonde medium surfer hair, purple eyes. wears a white t-shirt with black shorts that are sagging. on his left hand he has a gray glove with fingertips showing. and over the shirt a gray puffy vest he also has a black bandanna and white sunglsses.he has all white shoes. he is 5 foot 8 he has no scars and has really clear and smooth skin. on his right wrist he wears a white bracelet that his mom gave him when she was killed. He is pretty built and when sailing likes to take his shirt off to show his abs.

History: When he was a baby a group of pirate hunters killed his mom (a pirate who had a 25,000,001 bounty) He was left with a white bracelet. He was adopted by one of his mothers crew a talking turtle. when he was 13 the turtle also was killed by pirate hunters. 3 years later he trained really hard and became strong he came up with the idea to become a pirate gain a huge bounty and kill all the pirate hunters who come after him.so eventually he leaves his home and becomes a pirate. he gets 2 swords and starts training with them making moves and strengthening his arms. soon he starts searching for a strong reliable captain to work for.

Personality: He is quiet and smart and does not speak much. he is really serious. he has a deep voice because he rarely uses it. he thinks he is stronger than he really is so he always acts all cocky. all the girls like him but he doesnt really care much he is more focused on his goal. he is actually nine other than him not talking .

Ship:none

Ship Flag: none

Devil Fruit: none
type: none
effect: none

Special Abilities: none

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): sharp twister(twists really fast with swords held out),BAM(slaps opponent really hard with the face of his blades)

Weapons/Items: 2 ninja swords

Goals: get a large bounty and kill all pirate hunters


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PostSubject: Re: fresh   Fri Jan 04, 2013 10:15 am

Please, your history should be at least two good paragraphs in lenght, and appearance and personality should be at least a paragraph of six lines each. Also you didnt explicitly say how he got his bounty.

And if he has no special abilities (say no swordsmanship skills), then how can he handle swords?

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PostSubject: Re: fresh   Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:12 pm

yea ok
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