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PostSubject: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:19 am

Name: Nick "Wolf" Gander

Age: 14

Bounty: 10,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Pirate

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: North Blue

Appearance: Brown short spikey hair, green eyes with gold and blue flakes. has a scar above his left eyebrow and a tattoo of a wolf on his right forearm.Likes to wear all gray hoodie with a green shirt under. He has a green and gray snapback hat that he usually snaps to his belt loop on his jeans but when he is talking to girls he puts it on backwards.he also has black jeans with a green belt and gray sneakers with black laces. 5 foot 5 not too skiinny and not too fat he is normal. He has kind of a light raspy voice and smirks alot. His canine teeth are a little bit sharper than a normal humans. He looks a little older than he really is and is kind of built ,but not ripped.

History: Nick was always hangn with the girls and as he got older he started dating them. One day he stole his best friends girlfriend and him and his best friend got into a fight. Nick won and his best friend swore to kill him one day and left to become a pirate. After a few weeks Nick felt like he was not getting stronger and his old best friend( Zak ) will actually beat him so he too left to become a pirate. BUT before he left his home town he found a wind wind fruit in his closet at the top with a note atttatched to it. it read: EAT THIS AND YOU WILL BE ABLE TO CREATE AND MANIPULATE WIND, BUT YOU WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO SWIM AGAIN. So he ate it and left never to return to his homeland. Later he falls asleep in his ship, and wakes up hungry he goes into a town, and buys some food with the little money he had left. As he got there there were people yelling about saying they were all going to die. Nick asked the closest person what was going on ,and found out some person named moose was going to attack. He told the villagers that he would help protect them from moose ,but they all laughed at him asking how a kid was going to help fight. Nick shrugged it off ,and went to the entrance of the village to wait for moose. When moose got there Nick confronted him and moose laughed. Nick hit moose with a wind wind blast and moose was thrown back off a cliff. Nick started laughing and boasting telling the villagers he could do it. All the villagers were suprised and gave him the nickname "Wolf" for how he toook that guy down. They threw him a party for helping them out and he got to talk to alot of pretty girls. The next morning he woke up and and all the townspeople gave him free food. Eventually he left and started looking for a strong crew to join.

Personality: Cool, funny, kind of a flirt, is always talking to girls and most guys are jealous of him. He is also very charismatic and has a way with words and is very good at talking people into things and is pursuasive. when with other people he always cracks jokes and acts as cool as possible he is really friendly and hates people who are mean to girls. he likes having a good time and sparring weith other people. he can be serious when he has to . he loves proving people wrong and when he is right he likes to brag and make fun of the person who told him he was wrong.

Ship: Energetic Wolf

Ship Flag: Wind Sphere

Devil Fruit: kaze kaze Fruit
type: Logia
effect: the ability to create and control wind

Special Abilities: Super fast and really strong

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): kaze kaze punch(forms a bundle of wind around his fists as he punches also cutting the person), kaze kaze kick(forms a bundle of wind around his foot as he kicks also cutting the person), wind cannonball(forms a big wind sphere the size of a cannonball and hurls it at his opponent ehen it hits it explodes), wind blast(blasts the opponent with wind), tornado wave(has 3 mini tornados fly at the opponent), windy breath(blows a strong wind out his mouth.

Weapons/Items: none

Goals: pirate king


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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:51 am

Why did you repost your character?

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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:56 am

it was a accident my bad but am i approved
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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:31 am

Your history lenght is insufficient. It must be at least two paragraphs and I would appreciate if you extend the lenght of your appearance and personality as well.

The wind fruit is called Kaze Kaze no Mi, btw.

Aaand... I'd like to point out your history is a LITTLE bit weird lol, it actually made me laugh with this: "...saw a really hot girl and he went to talk to her he made the mistake by telling her he was A pirate because she was a marine captains daughter he stole the girls bike and rode to the shore as she told her dad. he lrft as fast as he coul as the father chased him..."

You might want it to have a little bit more sense. And please, use some commas and periods! This is a run-on sentence!

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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:35 am

fixed every thing it should be good now
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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 10:18 am

Wait... how was he able to kill this guy called Moose, tearing him up, if he had just found the fruit and ate it... One does not gain instant mastery over the fruits powers. I understand if you said you used your wind to push him down a canyon or something like that, but using it as tons of airblades to tear him up... that's something else.

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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:10 pm

fixed it so is more reasonable ready for approval
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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 6:03 pm

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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jan 04, 2013 6:35 pm

For a starter profile, it's worth APPROVING. So I just did.
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PostSubject: Re: nick "wolf" gander   Fri Jul 12, 2013 12:23 am

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