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PostSubject: Commander Marton "The Big Fist"    Sat Oct 13, 2012 11:13 am

Name: Commander Marton "The Big Fist"

Age: 39

Bounty: ---

Species: Human

Occupation: Fighter

Allegiance: Marine/Commander

Home Village/Ocean: East Blue

Appearance:

Marton has light grey hair, his eyes are very light blue color. He has light skin and a short grey beard, he has a red skull tatto imprinted on his chest. He wears plain white trousers and on his right leg there is a packet of cigars strapped to it, he also wears black shoes and is usually seen with golden brass knuckles, a white bandage can be found upon his nose.

History: Marton was born into a rich family, he lived in a big house which was located in a small village on the Eastern Part of the sea. Marton hated pirates for he disliked the way they behaved, they showed no mercy and always took all the loot. His family also disliked pirates, they were afraid that the pirates might rob their precious treasure. Marton had decided that he should join the marine forces and assist them on taking out pirates, however there was only 1 problem, he was afraid that he was too weak. His father hired him a boxing tutor so that Marton could defend himself, Marton worked very hard in his boxing lessons and showed a lot of effort. After 10 weeks of training Marton had mastered boxing, the tutor gave Marton I golden brass knuckle for all his hard work in lessons, he was very pleased. Once Marton turned 19 he decided to apply for the marines, they gladly accepted him. Marton had always completed his chores and completed them to a high standard, he had gained a promotion for this.

Marton was then told to assist in small missions such as robberies, missing items and deliveries. Marton had completed these missions successfully, he was very proud of himself. After a hard month of missions he had finally been promoted to the next rank. While Marton worked for the marines, his village was being robbed by a gang of pirates. They had took out his parents and stole they belongings they then burnt down the village, by the time Marton arrived the village had been burnt down. He burst into tears however held most of them in for he was a proud marine.

Once he had returned to the HQ, he had made a vow to himself that he will take out all of the pirates in this era. He was sent on many missions once more and completed them, after a few years of hard work he had been promoted to Commander. He visited his home town once more and began to explore it's burnt down buildings, the more he explored the more furious he was at pirates. Soon he set off to sea and began his quest to take down all of the pirates in the current era.

Personality: Marton can be very bossy at times however is very relaxed most of the time, he hates the thought of losing to a pirate and would pretty much take out all of the pirates in his sight. Marton isn't very chatty however during missions he can be very chatty, Marton isn't a big fan of jokes however enjoys a few every now and then. He normally is sleeping or exploring in his free time, he doesn't like being around crowded places..it gives him a closed feeling. Marton can be obidiant at times however can also be very grumpy. He loves the thrill of fighting and enjoys so strike down his enemy, he is the kind of man who will love working up a sweat. Marton, on hia free time can be found laying on a hammock or training.

Ship: Normal Marine Ship

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Special Abilities:

Tactics- Marton, while battling tries his best to think of a plan

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):

Golden Uppercut: Hits the enemy in the chin

Headbutt: A normal Headbutt

Weapons/Items: Golden Brass Knuckles, Cigar

Goals: 1) Rid the world of pirates 2) Spread his name




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PostSubject: Re: Commander Marton "The Big Fist"    Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:10 pm

Personality needs a bit more, then your done
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PostSubject: Re: Commander Marton "The Big Fist"    Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Commander Marton "The Big Fist"    Wed Oct 17, 2012 12:16 pm

spelling is off and ill need your rank to come down, the history isnt enough to justify the rank, fix it

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