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PostSubject: Daruki    Sun May 20, 2012 12:31 am

Name: "Metal Man"Lieutenant Daruki

Age:25

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Species: Human

Occupation:Marine commander

Allegiance: Navy/Marine, World Government

Home Ocean:North Blue

Appearance:He has white gray bangs that cover an eye that has a scar over it.He has a scarred face with emerald colored eyes. He wears a white and red cap that prints justice on the front. He has a scar across the left side of his chest. He wears gold watches and a tattoo on his back saying All is fair in Love and War and below it JUSTICE. He is a muscular man who wears a red headband over his face he wears a white undershirt and blue sweatpants and also wears big brown worker boots. Daruki was a 7'5 and had muscles like pythons, his head is small compared to his body and his legs are toned with a tattoo of his parents names

History: Daruki was born into a town plagued by war between marines and pirates. The pirates would fight other pirates for territory, and unfortunately Daruki's neighborhood was owned by the most notorious pirate crew in the village. To make matters worse his dad was a pirate and his mom was a marine so he was always being asked which side would he be on.



One night when Daruki was 13,the notorious pirates destroyed the neighborhood, killing his father in the process this angered Daruki. He tried to fight them himself but was brutally beaten down, his mother blocked the final hit from the leader of the pirate band and was killed in the process. This severely angered Daruki and he saw the evil in pirates and the life of piracy.

One crew member rushed at Daruki,but Daruki was saved by marines who surrounded the pirates who fled using sewage systems

Daruki woke up with amnesia the only thing he remembered was his name he was then trained by the marines and he picked up on some moves that they used such Soru Shigan and Tekkai after 5 years of being there with them.

The marines put him the 5 years of rigorous training such as making him change the sail when it got destroyed by climbing the pole making him carry barrels full of ammunition while running around the ship, waking him up in the middle of the night to do push ups on stormy nights he was swallowed by a sea beast the marines captured and tamed and it took him 5 days to escape without being digested. The marine officer controlling the ship told him the saw the potential in him that they saw in his father and also that they owed his father there life

Daruki was at first made a chore boy and he through the chores his muscles developed and he was sent to marine headquarters for a new position. He was made an ensign and was happy with his position. He was taking a stroll through town when he saw the wanted poster for the pirates who destroyed his village, he remembered the terrible things they had done and went to seek out each of them one by one despite marine orders.

He started first with the doctor and cook he killed them with Shigan destroying there work rooms on the ship. He then killed the shipwright who was in town buying supplies with Shigan and the force of this Shigan made a hole right through the shipwrights chest. Soon only the leader was left and Daruki confronted him face to face on the ship. Daruki age 24 was finally gonna have revenge, the leader used a sword but using his incredible speed he avoided the slashes, the leader used a gun but tekkai and Soru stopped the gun and finally the leader strapped a bomb ticking down one minute and he ran away avoiding Shigan(far distance) Daruki then used Soru to appear in front of him and used his father trademark sword that he had taken for this purpose and stabbed the bomb, destroying the bomb and the force of the attack made a gigantic whole through the chest and parts of the stomach. He took the dead bodies back to headquarters and was promoted to lieutenant.

After this Daruki participated in a marine meeting concerning matters on the marine base G5 and the problem with an outbreak of pirates. Daruki then went on to capture 10 pirates to prove himself worthy of the position of G5 member in the New World only to turn down the offer and sailed off on his own. Then Daruki sailed to help the Meteor Heroes fight some pirates for a while later having to leave on marine duties. Then Daruki found himself on a remote island and on this island and broke out in a fight with him and marine commodore karma tenma and daruki vs jiwang and santo. The fight between jiwang and daruki ended in a tie. The marines saw daruki as a valuable asset and a wonderful assist to other marines and promoted him to marine commander.


Personality:He hates pirates and the life of piracy for the curse it laid on his life. He believes the justice through the marines is what everyone should pursue and he sees all pirates as just wastes of life. The only pirate he respects is his dad who protected him with his life and believe that though pirates are evil once every decade a pirate with a heart of gold will be born and risk his life for others enemies and allies alike. He follows his parents belief all enemies whether pirates and marines if they give you a hell of a fight no matter what you will have a solemn respect for them

Ship: name of ship

Ship Flag: describe

Devil Fruit: Limited to only three devil fruit users per person
type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)

Special Abilities: Rokushiki

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Soru, Shigan, Tekkai, Tekkai Kenpo


Soru Jet Kick- Daruki with a speed enhanced by soru

Soru Jet Punch- Daruki punches at a speed enhanced by soru

Soru jet Lariat-Daruki runs at a speed enhanced by Soru with his arm sticking and smashes into the opponent

Soru Jet Kick Barrage- Daruki when falling from the air kicks at the opponent multiple times enhanced by soru

Soru Punch Barrage- Daruki uses punches enhanced by soru to beat down the opponent

Soru Head Smash- Daruki headbutts the opponent at speeds enhanced by Soru



Weapons/Items: take what you want from the approved weapons list but custom weapons must be registered and approved

Goals: Be Fleet admiral in Marines




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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sun May 20, 2012 6:00 pm

Ok, let me open up by saying that Rokushiki isn't a hidden ability, you can't "Unlock" it out of rage or whatever, it's a fighting style that takes YEARS to learn, and even more YEARS to master, so your history is unapprovable at this point. Also, wouldn't that be weird if his mother and father belonged to different sides of the same war, but fought for their son's belief? I mean, that seems a little odd to me, but I guess I can't reject that, just some food for thought.

Also, there's no way in hell I'm going to approve all the Rokushiki techniques for a starting char, absolutely no way. You can only get a MAXIMUM of three when you start of, and you'll have to justify them in your history for me to approve them. Also, the actual Rokushiki moves belong in the Learned Techniques section, and Rokushiki belongs in Special abilities.

I'll appreciate it if you won't write your appearance as a grocery list, but more like a paragraph, makes it much more enjoyable to read it that way. Also, you can't refer to canon chars in your application, so saying he is as muscular as Garp can't work.
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sun May 20, 2012 6:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sun May 20, 2012 6:14 pm

Even though you know three techniques, you mention Shigan and Kami-E in your history. please take care of that.
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sun May 20, 2012 6:15 pm

Shigan is one of my techniques
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sun May 20, 2012 10:08 pm

Approved, because all of Sleepy's concerns have been addressed.
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sat Jul 07, 2012 9:47 pm

added techniques
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Sat Jul 07, 2012 10:07 pm

REAPPROVED
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Mon Dec 17, 2012 1:03 am

added history promoted marine rank and added tekkai kenpo need reapproval, affects kick in after current thread with maxulus
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PostSubject: Re: Daruki    Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:15 am

RE-APPROVED

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