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PostSubject: Jack Nickelson   Sun May 06, 2012 10:20 pm

Name: Jack Nickelson

Age: 20

Bounty: 5.000.000

Species: human

Occupation: none (could be a navigator or a fighter)

Allegiance: Pirate (no crew)

Home Ocean: North blue

Appearance: Has brownish hair, Has a long scar on his forehead that separates his hairline from the rest of his head. Is roughly 6,3 and has lanky features. While he doesn't have much bulk he is muscular. Typically wears a Heavy black coat and black sweat pants (though he does take off his coat in warm weather, Underneath he has a plain Black t-shirt) Has green eyes and typically walk slouched with his arms hanging
down. He has two swords on his sides and has 2 very large chains coming out of his jacket. His face has very long features and his eyes are almost always blood shot (not from drinking but from his naps that you probably woke him up from). His Feet aresmall relative to the rest of his body (especially his legs which give him most of his height).

History: Jack was born in unknown circumstances on an unknown island. He feel from the sky in a cradle with his twin brother Michal. The cradle was carried by a rather large bird but not much else is known about. The island in question was a known navy island called "SnowPort". Jack and Michal spent the first 17 years of there lives relatively uneventful. They went to an orphanage, got adopted early on by a family of two named the Nichelson's, got in a bit of trouble here and there but never really were trouble makers Until one day when a knock came on there parents door. There father opened the door and was greeted with the faces of two navy lieutenants , The twin swordsmen and protectors of the town known Boomer and Stacy. Boomer quickly cut the head off of there father right in front of Jack's eyes and proceeded to ask Jack where his brother was. Jack couldn't answer as the shook of what had just happened quickly overcame jack. Stacy then proceeded to search the entire house while Jack was interrogated by Boomer. Boomer yelled at him about things he didn't know about. "What devil fruit and why our family" he thought as Boomer threatened him. Soon after Stacy brought out his brother and his mother out. They then started yelling at them to but to his surprise his brother looked like he knew what was going on. He quickly confessed the story. "I stole the devil fruit from the marines 5 days ago" he said "I was just trying to make a better life for my family, I didn't think it would end like this" Boom then proceeded to take out his sword and held it up to Michal chin "Now where is this devil fruit?" Michal stood up and brought out his jacket and held up a fruit. Boomer then without a second thought cut Michal hand off and stanched the fruit He held it up to his mouth but Stacy started yelling at him. It seemed she wanted the fruit to. Boomer put down the fruit and yelled at Stacy while Michal throbbed in pain and there mother mourned the loss of her husband and her sons hand. As the twins fought Jack sunk away and snatched the devil fruit from under them. The twins quickly turned to see jack eat the fruit in question, however unlike what jack thought he didn't feel a surge in power. "Was it fake?" he thought as Stacy swung her sword towards his forehead. the sword sunk half an inch into his skull but then stopped much to Jack surprise. Chains suddenly came out of the gash of his forehead and proceeded to race up Stacy's arms and snapped it clean off. The chains also raced towards boomer who was about to kill Jack's mother and snatched him away right as he swung his sword. Using is chains he picked up the twins and snapped there necks, shortly after Jack fainted. He woke up 3 days later in his home with bandages on his head. His Mother told him that she sunk off in the middle of the night and put the body's of the lieutenants outside of the port of the town and everyone was in a panic trying to figure out what happened. She told him that she loved him but needed to leave in fear that there whole town might be hurt by his presence. He agreed so after a brief mourning period took some money and ran off. Vowing that one day he would take care of the navy so that he wouldn't have to live in fear of his mother and brother being in danger because of him. Before he left he got up in front of the town (which was in the middle of the funeral of the lieutenants ) and told everyone he killed them. He took the swords of the lieutenants and ran off on a small fishing boat while under fire of the navy. Between the age of 17 and 20 he trained with a fellow navy hater who gave him daggers to use for his chains on a deserted island and when he thought he had apt fighting skills he left the island and went towards the grand line.

Personality: He is pretty lazy and sleeps for most of the day. He typically runs from fights unless with the navy. He holds dears his family but other then that he cares for little but his namaka (of which he has none right now). When he wasn't recently woken up however he has a much different personality. He frequently rushes into battle, has a loud mouth, drinks, sings, laughs and sings (none of which he does when tiered). He very rarely realizes his own power and hurts people with chins he is playing with (he is sorry for it thought, most of the time at least). Beyond that he get's in a hated rage when in the presence of the navy and kills anyone he can in the navy regardless of rhyme or reason).

Ship name: Nicklesons vow

Ship flag: A normal skull and cross bones but with chains coming from behind.

Devil fruit: Kusari Kusair no mi (Chain Chain fruit) (http://theonepiecerp.forum-motion.com/t2033-kusari-kusari-no-mi-the-chain-chain-fruit?highlight=kusari)
Type:Paramecia
Effect: Effect: Capabilities: The user his body beneath the skin, becomes like chainmail armor, the user is also able to create chains or loose rings from any part of his body which he can controll freely, when touching an object he can attach a chain to it, the user can also determine how big the created chains will be

special ability's: Nitoryu, Basic navigation knowledge, Resistant to cold weather

Learned techniques: Nitoryu: Sword trap (he expertly traps the opponents sword in between his own allowing it to be snapped by an outside force) Behead (swings his swords at someones neck from two different directions) Horizontal slash (slashes both swords horizontally) Vertical slash (like the horizontal slash but vertical) Chen Chen no mi: Chain daggers(Puts his daggers on his chains and uses them) at his opponent) Chain surround (surrounds the opponent with chains and if successfully tightly grips there arms and legs) Chain walk (uses the chains he has growing out of his back to walk around) Chain trap (traps a swords in between chain links and twists with the intent of snapping the sword, also works with arms and legs) Chain slam (Slams the opponent with a lot of force with a large chain) Chains squeeze (when chains are surrounding the opponent he quickly tightens them with the intent to break bones, cut of arms and legs and damage blood vessels) Chain propeller (chains in the shape of propellers to consistently hit the opponent or propel his ship on the seas) Chain armor (surrounds user with chains for a defense) Chain counter (used against non-swordsmen fighters if they punch into your chain armour the chins catch the fist/leg and try to wrap around them)

Weapons: 2 Katanas 6 daggers

Goals: to destroy the navy
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Nickelson   Sun May 06, 2012 10:39 pm

First of all, could you make the appearance slightly longer? Like 3 lines if possible, just trying to be more detailed and everything. You also seem to not have the personality and I'd ask you to check the character sheet template and follow it as it is there. You need to further explain the techniques Jack uses, "two swords style" should be in the ability part and the "Chain Chain fruit" be in the devil fruit section. And the techniques that are part from these abilities should be in the techniques part and be explained properly.

Like this: In Abilities you put "Mera Mera no mi" type Logia and you put in the techniques part "Fire Fist: Anna makes fire envolve her fist and throws punches at the enemies" for example. Not only name them but also explain them.

As for the weapon, if it isn't in the universal weapon list you should make a weapon sheet for it and wait for it to be approved. Then make the character.

As for the katana, it is already registered so that is fine.


Anyway follow these things and it should be ready for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Nickelson   Mon May 07, 2012 9:10 am

Lost wrote:
First of all, could you make the appearance slightly longer? Like 3 lines if possible, just trying to be more detailed and everything. You also seem to not have the personality and I'd ask you to check the character sheet template and follow it as it is there. You need to further explain the techniques Jack uses, "two swords style" should be in the ability part and the "Chain Chain fruit" be in the devil fruit section. And the techniques that are part from these abilities should be in the techniques part and be explained properly.

Like this: In Abilities you put "Mera Mera no mi" type Logia and you put in the techniques part "Fire Fist: Anna makes fire envolve her fist and throws punches at the enemies" for example. Not only name them but also explain them.

As for the weapon, if it isn't in the universal weapon list you should make a weapon sheet for it and wait for it to be approved. Then make the character.

As for the katana, it is already registered so that is fine.


Anyway follow these things and it should be ready for approval.
ALright so I made the changes
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Nickelson   Mon May 07, 2012 11:22 am

I see no problems with this application anymore, and was asked to approve it. I hope it doesn't cause any problems.

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