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PostSubject: Lazin Strong    Sat Mar 24, 2012 8:38 am

Name: Lazin Strong

Age:25

Bounty:N/A

Species: Human

Occupation:Fighther


Allegiance: World Government

Home Village/Ocean: Grandline

Appearance:

Lazin has green bright eyes.
He has a sailor suit under his green plain jacket.
Lazin has thick black shoes with sparkled shoe laces sticking out.
His hair is mostly spiked.


History: It was April in the Grandline and it was raining. ''That`s weird you won`t cry'' said Lazin`s mom. Lazin stared at his mom calmly. 8 years passed and Lazin was now 8 years old. ''Come back horsey!'' yelled Lazin. The horses ran down the field and Lazin chased them. There you are Lazin grabbed the horse. ''Let`s get back home horsey!'' said Lazin. ''I got back the horse!'' said Lazin. ''Ma, can I go play with other kids now?'' asked Lazin. ''Sure but be back.'' said Lazin mom. Lazin ran down with the other kids. ''Lazin your here!'' said a kid. ''Were going to play the game attack'' said another kid. ''Sure how do I play?'' asked Lazin. ''You punch each other in they say uncle'' said a kid. The kids started punching each other. Lazin got punched in the gut and got kicked. Lazin punched one kid with rage.One kid threw a rock and it hit his head. ''Hey that`s cheating!'' shouted Lazin. ''I don`t see anybody else with a problem!'' shouted the kid. Lazin then jumped on the kid and punched him by cheek to cheek. ''SAY UNCLE SAY UNCLE!'' shouted Lazin.
''UNCLE UNCLE UNCLE UNCLE!!!!!!!!'' yelled the kid. Lazin got up panting. ''I'm the last one left'' said the last kid remaining. The last kid ran to Lazin and beated him up. ''I won`t lose!'' yelled Lazin. Lazin fell to the floor punched up. I won`t lose when Lazin got back up he punched the kid with no hesitation. The kid was in so much pain. He yelled uncle! ''I win! Bye guys. said Lazin. Lazin then ran to home. ''What happend to you Lazin?" asked Lazin Mom. ''It was a game'' said Lazin.




6 years passed and Lazin was now 14. Lazin was drinking hot chocolate. ''Hey mom?'' said Lazin. ''When can I join the World Goverment?'' said Lazin ''Well I don`t know you should choose your own future'' said Lazin`s Mom. ''By the way what are you reading?" said Lazin`s mom. ''Im reading something about DevilFruit`s" said Lazin. Lazin them heard booms outside the house. Lazin got up and ran outside he then saw pirates shooting cannons at the village. He grabbed a shovel and ran down. ''Pirates are here!'' said Lazin. He ran up to one pirate and hit him on the and did the same with an other pirate. Only the aldults of the village ran down to fight the pirates. One of the pirates said '' A Adrimal is here!'' The Adrimal started beating up pirates. ''Why is the Admiral here?'' asked Lazin. ''It's because we shot up a great red light meaning pirates were here.'' said the person. ''It reaches into the sky so high anybody can see it 2,000 miles away'' said the Person. ''Every time the World Government sees the red light they will send out a Admiral.'' said the Person. ''Cool I will go help the Admiral'' said Lazin. Lazin ran to assit the Adrimal. A pirate ran to the Adrimal. Lazin saw this and hit the pirate in the stomach. He hit a pirate on the neck and the cheek. ''Hey kid you got some skill'' said the Adrimal. ''Thanks!'' said Lazin. Lazin and the Adrimal was beating pirates. It took Lazin and the Adrimal hours 5 to finish all the pirates. The adrimal looked at his ship on fire. ''Looks like my ship is destroyed....'' said the Admiral.




''Hey you can stay at my place!'' said Lazin. Lazin showed the adrimal to his home. He opend the door and his mom saw the adrimal. ''Oh hello.'' said Lazin mom. ''He needs to stay here beacuse his ship was destroyed.'' said Lazin. ''It will take about nine years you know.'' said the Adrimal. ''Can you teach some of your skills?'' asked Lazin. ''Why?'' said the Admiral. ''Because I want to become a Admiral like my dad!'' said Lazin. ''Where is your dad?'' said the Admiral. ''He got killed by pirates!'' said Lazin. ''I want to stop pirates from killing innocent people that's the reason I want to join the World Government.'' said Lazin. ''If you want to stop Pirates that bad I will help you!'' said the Admiral. The Admiral gave him a nice smile. Lazin then knew this was going to be good.
''Of course let's start now'' said the Adrimal. They both walked outside to the woods. ''Turn your back around'' said the Adrimal. ''Alright'' said Lazin. Lazin turned his back around and the Adrimal was about to punch him. The Adrimal punched Lazin on the back of his head. ''Ow! What was that for!?!?'' shouted Lazin. ''Im going to teach you to feel the flow of energy before it hits you.'' said the Adrimal. The Adrimal sat down his back was in front of Lazin. "Now try throwing some rocks at me'' said the Adrimal. Lazin picked up some rocks and started throwing rocks at the Adrimal's head. Lazin was surprised that the Adrimal could dodge the rocks with just moving without looking at the rocks. ''Now it's your turn.'' said the Adrimal. Lazin sat down and the Adrimal threw some rocks. Lazin concertrated he kinda felt energy flying. The direction was going to hit his ear! Lazin slightly moved his head away the rock passed his head. ''Great!'' said the Adrimal. ''Come on let's run'' said the Admiral. Both of them ran down the grassy plains. Wherever Lazin was with the Adrimal he felt happy.


9 years later, Lazin trained with all his might at the forest of his village. Lazin was now 23. All the villagers were wacthing the Adrimal leave the island. Lazin was wacthing the Adrimal go...on his ship. Here take this DevilFruit. Lazin stared at the Devil Fruit. ''T-thanks...'' said Lazin. The Adrimal ship started leaving and Lazin waved bye. Lazin then walked to his house and placed the Devil Fruit in his backpack. He walked and got a bottle of water. He also got some food. He ran outside and saw his boat. He jumped in the boat. And he untied the boat from the dock. He stuffed the DevilFruit in his mouth and chewed it up then he gulped it down. ''IT`S TIME I JOIN THE WORLD GOVERMENT!'' said Lazin. Where Lazin would go he would be happy to join the World Government!

Personality: Lazin is cool minded most of the time. He acts like everything isn't a big deal. When he's in a fight, Lazin uses his best strategy. Lazin cares about the damage done to him deeply. When people shouts at him for destroying their house he will say, "What a drag". Lazin is happy to use the World Government to get out of problems. When problems get really out of hand Lazin will use an excuse to get out of trouble. When Lazin sees a pirate he will treat them like an enemy


Ship:N/A

Ship Flag:N/A

Devil Fruit: Pika Pika Fruit{Glimmer Glimmer}
type: Logia
effect: allows the user to create, control, and transform into light at will, turning the user into a Light Human.

Special Abilities: powers excluding the devil fruit not techniques for example a sword style

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
String Light: This attack allows Lazin to shoot light in a straight light out of his finger.
String of Jewels:This attack shoots small light packs but have high energy which travel's 10 yards.
Lighter Spear: This attack allows Lazin to shape a spear that can melt steel,iron,and gold.
Speed Star:This move allows Lazin to move at 746 miles per hour.
Raining Light: Light comes out of his body and forms a wall over Lazin and when he realeses it. It rains down towars his enemy.
Lighter Kick: This attack allow Lazin to charge a large amount of light and when he fires it the light out in the shape of a dragon.
Light Shield:This move allows him to create light to into a shield form that reflects the foe's attack.
Light Knives: This attack allows light shaped knives that cover his hand as he can slice through flesh.
Weapons/Items:N/A


Goals: To become head admiral one day.[justify]


Last edited by Ligton on Thu Apr 05, 2012 6:26 pm; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:58 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Tue Mar 27, 2012 2:11 am

Definitely unapproved. The personality is short beyond belief, the appearance is just a picture, and the history makes no sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Tue Mar 27, 2012 6:20 am

oh shit yeah, the personality, damn it
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:23 am

FIXED!
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:36 am

Appearance needs to have a slight description with the picture, but others have done just pics before so ill let it slide. Your history on the other hand is strange. Where did it happen? What did he do during those 9 years?
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:40 am

Fixed!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:42 pm

BA-BUMP!
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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:57 pm

OBJECTION!!!!

Speed Star:This ability allows Lazin to disspear into small packets of light. So his whole body can travel at the speed of light.

Last time I check we weren't allowed to do that. I mean I literally less then 2 months ago made Gideon with the same fruit and was told the Speed of Light is entirely too fast..

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PostSubject: re: Lazin Strong   Thu Apr 05, 2012 6:33 pm

HOOOOLD IT!
As much as I must enforce the rule of no mini-modding (TBL, contact a moderator when you notice this issue), I understand and agree with the man's point.
Fake Edit: Ligton edited the skill to a reasonable rate of over a sixth of a mile a second for the speed!

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PostSubject: Re: Lazin Strong    Thu Apr 05, 2012 6:58 pm

but people can travel on light , havent you heard? isnt that what he is doing?
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