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PostSubject: youri mountain    Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:31 am

Name: Youri Mountain

Age: 21

(ex)Bounty: 79.000.000

Species: Human

Occupation: royal shichibukai

Allegiance: Pirates,WG

Home Village/Ocean: east blue

Appearance:

Youri stands a tall 1.83 meter, and weights always around 67 kilo. His build is rather muscled, showing he has been through training. Physically you can see his arms, in comparison to the rest of his body, are rather slender with no sign of advanced muscle mass. His legs are long, and like the rest of his body fairly muscled.

He has dark brown hair. His hair is unchanged from the moment he wakes up. Sometimes it's down, sometimes it looks like he came from a storm. His eye brows are black, and a bit thick. His eyes are deep dark blue, and are almond form. his lips are pretty much regular, together with the rest of his face.

Youri mostly wears a pair of jeans, a dirty white T-shirt, and a blue coat over it. This is the only set of clothes he wears because he can't carry much around with traveling so much.

History:
Youri, even though not remembering it, was at first part of a royal linage. His original name was Youroid jester denberg.

the small 14 years he lived here his biological father trained him to become, just like him, the knight of jesters. To become this he was trained with the lance, and was learned the oath from young age. Through training he became stronger than ya average teenager, being able to pull off high athletic stunts.

1 month from turning 15 a war broke out within the organization his family was part of , and he was send to aid them by doing chores on a war ship. The days were long and the work was hard, but that would build up character, said his dad. But in the middle of the trip they were attacked by notorious pirates. The pirates had no mercy and used a giant warship to blow him and his crew-mates to smithereens. Luckily he was able to jump into the water before one of the bullets or wrecked pieces could hit him, but the price was to be taken away by the strong current lying below.

He stranded on a far away island in east blue, it was a wonder he survived until now. Half-dead and having memory loss, he could do nothing but lie at the beach he stranded. Luckily someone found him, named Raymond mountain. He saw the kid, and for unknown reasons he picked him up and brought him to his house, where his wife nursed him until he got better. He got accustomed to the mountain's ways and even saw the already kids there as brothers.

His childhood went quickly and soon he was 17. Being a dropout from school, he saw his future taking a dive. At the time he only saw one chance of obtaining eternal glory and wealth, becoming a pirate and finding one piece. Getting the money to buy a small boat was hard. Here and there he had to steal stuff, and acting Independent from his parents didn't help him one bit.

After thieving everything together he began his journey. He celebrated the first night on his own with some strange fruit he stole from a marine ship. It was tough getting it, but he had enough experience with stealing stuff. Having eaten the disgusting fruit he quickly learned from his powers and started to use it with stealing things. Not that it was necessary since he stole enough for another month, but he liked the kick in it.

Through the circuit he even quickly joined the(then) rising pirate crew steel village. His work was at the start simple and easy in his opinion..Maybe because he slacked around most of the time. Then he was introduced to some kind of secret division. Boredom strikes again!. Only after he became commander of the division he began liking it. After many events that hardened his personality a bit he was assigned to a island take-over. He failed miserably and was not able to face Iken again, so left leaving only a note behind.

Then the era began where his goal was to become shichibukai began. The only reason was because of the benefits, and health care. He became dead tired of all the being chased. As a grand finale to his old WG sabotaging days he began a crime-spree, raising his bounty quite a-lot in a short time, and before he knew it he was send a letter.

The shichibukai were not exactly what he expected. It was way more fun then expected, although karasu always holds a gun against his head.


Personality:
Youri has a split personality, which change often depending on who he's around with and other small stuff like the weather.
On one side he can be nice, listening, wise, smart, and shows leadership. It is only that he close to never shows it, nor wants to show it. It became more a hidden personality then a second personality. Mostly he is cheery, hyper, sarcastic and ruthless. This mix always causes people to showcase him as random.

Outside of the regular routine he has a few other things that one might notice. One of them is that he has a very short fuse, saying the wrong words at the wrong time might bring you in danger around him! On the other side he also shows protectiveness towards those he likes or just finds 'amusing' .

Apart from everything he shows from the outside, he can be very cautious and through-thinking from the inside. Sometimes he himself even showcases his other emotions as fake and just a act.

Ship: The- I'm on a boat!
A small 2 man designed boat.

Ship Flag: a jolly roger with stripes crossing each other on the background

Devil Fruit:meimu meimu fruit
type:Paramecia
effect:it let the user make illusions.(these illusions can only be seen by the one who is targeted)
also he can change the landscape(or at least the opponent thinks so).
he can also make illusion duplicates that can talk.
he can only use it on max 100 people, and create up to 200 illusions,also he can make an illusion duplicate of people he meets/has seen before

Special Abilities:

ancient language: Thanks to the organization's ancient history they have secret books written in ancient language. In order to read them each child has learned the language by the age of 10. It is one of the few things together with some vague flashbacks he remembers from before the accident.

Denberg jesters trait : Youri's only inheritance is a special eye trait allowing him to focus his eyes to the extreme to even notice the smallest vibrations in eye sight. this cannot be used for long duration, and the longer the use the lighter his eyes become.(during cooldown they become darker again)

Master illusionist: Youri through many experiences with his fruit has reached the maximum illusions he can use.

Sneaky: Youri can walk around with making as less noise as humanly possible. Being a master thief/illusionist learned him this.

Weapons/Items: None for his training

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25)
(forgot them to learn new technique's when he starts his new training)

Goal: To gain eternal fame and glory


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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:37 pm

Okay.
1.Much, much too short. Extend everything.
2. Please check grammar and spelling.
3. didn't history say he wanted to find One Piece? Why the sudden change of heart in his goals? And what is an ancient weapon? Like a really old sword?
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:06 pm

Everything is spot-on. BTW: DF can be used by anyone and can be used multiple times. It's so that it's not first-come-first-serve.

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:51 pm

i made my bounty higher for stealing WG documents,helping in a prison break,spying on the WG,blowing up a town, and pirating(with pirating i mean pillaging and marine killing and minor crimes)
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:54 pm

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:58 pm

i've changed youri into captain,leading a division in steel gave him the experience needed.needs re-approving
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:45 pm

added family trait,needs re-approval
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:31 am

needs re-approval,bounty raise of 25.000.000 for destroying the auction house,saving slaves,participating in a war,and being an ex-commander of a yonkou crew.I also added the D.mountain family sword and paint paint pencil.

(I discussed the bounty raise with red so it should be ok )
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:33 am

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:11 pm

bounty raise of 14.000.000,one for killing the 18.000.000 bounty pirate roel and the other is for killing the Lieutenant marcelo,that should be around 5.000.000.
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Oct 15, 2011 8:16 am

changed techniques,and a new ship he acquired on one of his journey's,needs approval
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:08 am

Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but to lift even a huge ship would need balloons of an absolutely ridiculous and unfeasible size. You know with air balloons, how they need a massive balloon just to lift that relatively small basket? A small ship is much, much bigger and heavier. I just don't see it working, unless you explain it more in detail to why it'd work.

Which techniques were edited?
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:24 pm

all techniques are new,and I changed the ship Razz
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:37 pm

Hmm... Can the imaginary Youris still damage the opponent with bullets in the Cross-fire tech? Illusions shouldn't be able to actually hurt the opponent physically since they're, well, not really there to begin with. Cross-fire should be fine, as long as only the real Youri is firing actual bullets and the like. Just be sure to be clear in your post about which Youri is the real one, so there isn't any confusion there.

How does the target eventually get out of the Blind Illusion? A certain amount of posts, when the battle ends?

Besides that, I'd say everything else is fine.
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:40 pm

edited a limit on it,and of-course they would not be real,the idea is to get the target confused about from where the bullet comes(and of-course I will state the real one)
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:30 pm

Ah, thanks for clarifying that for me Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Fri Jul 13, 2012 7:20 pm

Updated!( and to be sure, I intentionally left some things blank in the first part of the first part of his history because they are going to be filled in a chain of threads)
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PostSubject: Re: youri mountain    Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:42 am

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