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PostSubject: Dorian D. Heron "Bare Fist Dorian"   Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:14 pm

Name: Dorian Heron "Bare Fist Dorian"

Age:20

Bounty: 200,000,000

Species: Human

Theme Song:Strong Rubber

Occupation: Pirate/Navigator/Captain

Allegiance: Captain The Bare Fist Pirates, The Neo Bare Pirates

Home Village/Ocean:East Blue

Appearance: He's 6'5 feet tall. He has no chest, arm, or leg fat what so ever. Shirtless, you can see his ribs if he sucks his gut in. He has a 6 pack, and a large scar on the side of his eye. His legs are long and bony legs, with medium size calf muscles. His heck is long and slender, like the rest of his body. And his face is very bony. You can see the imprints of his skull when he is wet, or even dry some times. He has a Carmel skin completion, and dark short black hair that he keeps cut him self. He wear's a black T-shirt with a long white short sleeve coat around it that has many contraptions such as a Comps, Fighter Gloves (Not Boxing, like UFC fighter gloves), and anything else he decides to put in there. His wear's baggy denim black shorts that have 4 pockets, two front, two back. He wears a belt with a Skull belt buckle around his waist, but he tightens it just enough for it to be comfortable. His foot wear consist of black saddles that tie around his feet. And two black sweat band's that are around his ankles. Dorian is normally seen with a plain, emotionless face, due to his horrible history, he finds it hard to find something to smile about. He also wears a long black head band that he tied around his neck. The Stream is about 4 feet long and makes it down to his butt.


History: Dorian Herron is a troubled young man who was neglected as a child by his peers and his family. Dorian never knew his father, and felt that's the main reason why people didn't like him. Because he didn't have a father to teach how to be a Man. Dorian tired his best to fit in with the other kids since he was 4. But after a while, he gave up, and decided to become a loner. Dorian then began being a hooligan. By Stealing from the Market Place, which was a breeze, on account Dorian was fast for his age, and have very good balance and endurance. Beating up the local kids who teased him on a daily basis. Although it was all hard at first, the more the did it. The stronger and faster he became each day. Even though it sounds back, a criminal was making Dorian into a strong man. Dorian's Mother didn't care if he wasn't home. So Dorian rarely ever came home. Unless he needed to hide for the Marines. When Dorian turned 7, he finally moved out his mothers house, to become a criminal, and better yet, become a man. As Dorian continued his crimes, his publicity grew, and so did his hatred for his father. Day by Day, life was a struggle. Not the crimes themselves, but Dorian coping with the mental stress from what he heard about his father. Dorian then swore, he'd become a better man then his father. Stronger, Faster, 10x the man his father man, no 100x, no...1,000x better! One day, when Dorian was 12, and his strength had passed 6 men, and his speed could probably keep up with a cheetah, if he tried. Dorian choose to go on an all out riot against his home town, Negro Bay. Dorian started by destroying homes, mainly small houses with one punch, Some people grew in fear of Dorian's Inhuman strength. Although some thought "HE'S JUST A KID! WE SHOULD HANG HIM AND GET IT OVER WITH!!" Soon, a angry mob of villagers were after Dorian, but Dorian didn't run. Instead, he found them. He told them "...You wanna fight....then come on..." Dorian stood in front of the 100 of angry grown men, waiting for their next move. Then, a medium size man with a pitch fork rushed towards Dorian. Dorian's eye's narrowed, and his pupils turned black as a midnight with no moon. He easily evaded each lunge that the man threw towards him with his pitch fork. Finally, Dorian kicked the pitch fork into the air with one foot, raising his foot straight into the air. Thus, bringing his foot down on the man's head, knocking his head into the ground, and crushing his face completely. At that moment, the rest of the mob grew in fear of Dorian. But just as another man jumped out the crowed. Dorian quickly turned his attention to the man. Dorian then kicked the falling Pitch fork right into the mans chest, just before the pitch for hit the ground. At that, more and more men began attacking Dorian. Until only one was standing. His name was Leon Lexus. Leon and his crew had stopped on this Island to refill his ship on food. Until he heard of a problem of a violent riot breaking out. Dorian glared at Leon, he knew nothing of Pirates during the time. Leon told Dorian he has quiet some skill, but his Anger is going to be the end of him. Enraged, Dorian rushed towards Leon in a blind rage. Dorian then brought his fist back and prepared to do his signature move. "Bare....FIST!!!"
Dorian quickly threw a bullet fast punch at Leon. Leon stood there unharmed, as he caught Dorian's fist, just before it hit his face, WITH HIS TONGUE! Leon pushed Dorian back 10 feet with a lunge of his head. Sending Dorian flying back. Dorian then stopped him self and landed on the ground. He looked up to see were Leon was, but he was gone. Leon then appeared behind Dorian and grabbed Dorian's arm and pulled it behind his back, he then slammed Dorian to the ground and restricted any movement. whispered in his ear "Do you want to learn how to fight?" Dorian, stopped, he was paralyzed in pure terror. Dorian then spoke up "I....I want to learn how to fi.....I WANNA LEARN HOW TO FIGHT! I WANT TO BE A MAN!!!!!!!!!" Leon grinned and then disappeared again. He had left to tell his crew that their going to make this Town their main HQ. Before they started training, Leon Gave Dorian a Devil fruit, to make sure he wouldn't get hurt while sparing with Leon, He gave him the Gomu Gomu No Mi. For the next 10 years, Leon trained Dorian in the arts of Kung Fu, Karate, and Kick Boxing. Leon's Navigator, Polimar, Taught Dorian how to Navigate. After Dorian hit 17. He decided to set sail, and become a Pirate, just like Leon. But not for any intentions of gaining fame, and fortune. But to Become a Strong man!

The War On Ashople

Dorian currently took part in a war that involved the hostile take over of the island Ashople. The Marines felt the need to take control of this Island. Dorian, unknowingly, was on the Island at the same time as his past master, Leon Lexus. When Dorian stalked Leon to the Mansion were other pirate captains were meeting to discuss the matters. He volunteer him self to help fight. Dorian was just leaving the Mansion, although the battle had already started, just to see one of the Navy's strongest Admirals standing face to face in front of him, Major Payne. Although Dorian was defeated, Major Payne vowed he'd kill him one day. Even though those were his intentions..Dorian was saved by Leon. After the War, Dorian begged Leon to teach train him to become even STRONGER then he already was. He wanted to be able to defeat Payne. Leon accepted. For 6 months, Leon trained on a large Island a bit farther off then Ashople. Dorian learned new techniques, and his strength was increased ten folds.

The Bare Fist Assemble

Dorian has currently put together a Pirate Crew called the Bare Fist Pirates and has gained a reputation of defeated powerful Pirates. Such as the Shipwrecker Lendo Maki. He and his crew have also gotten into quartiles with the High Respected and Well know Vice Admiral Major Payne. Dorian and his crew with his original members, Van Slyer and Jacob, have currently gained 3 new members which consist of the Gold Gold user Richard, The Brave Karol Wani, and The Okama Kempa user Leroy. Together they all fought and defeated King Don, a Hito Hito No Mi: Mini Buddah User.

Dorian has now gained new friends and abilities. After his training with Leon, which took place before Dorian formed his crew, right after the War on Sabaody Archipelago. Dorian discovered he could inflate his bones while He was resting from Training and chose to use it in Battle, thus Giant Mode was born. Dorian's newest members, Frankiln, an Inventor and Cyborg, and Patrick, a Big Hearted Drunk have both joined Dorian's crew. They are currently sailing for the GrandLine.


NEWWar Against the Grandlines Smartest Man! War on Metal Brain Island

Dorian and his crew were attacked while sailing the seas by Bonard Scott Ludwig's attack force. Due to Dorian not being prepared. They were able to hit them hard and make off with the ships shipwright, King. Dorian and The Bare Fist then found the location of Metal Brain Island and went on a full assault.

Dorian then, with his bare hands. Defeated the impenetrable Mega Bon 1.0. Thus, getting his bounty at approximately 200 million. After the battle, His crew split up. Doing so made Dorian's entire persona alter to the worse. Dorian now sails the Grandline, with no destination.


Personality: Dorian is a very clam young man. He expresses him self through words, and proves points by logic. He is very wise and doesn't like stupid things, or people. When annoyed, he tries his best to calm him self down, Or get away from the situation. When it comes time to fight. He uses Kung Fu: Self Defense style, to prevent any unneeded blood shed. On account he is saving his skill for his Father, who's location is still unknown.

NEWNew Updated Personality:
After the split up of his crew. Dorian has changed the way he views Friendship. He still views it as something sarcarde. But no longer easily claims some one as a friend. Now its very hard to have Dorian open up to most people. He keeps to him self and will no hesitate to take down anyone who gets in his way. Dorian also is more quick to fight people now. Regardless of who it is, and not hold back. Dorian has now an insecure type of persona of him self. He thinks people ignore or leave him because he's not interesting or amazing enough. In saying that, he normally yells "I'M AMAZING" after doing something that isn't so amazing, such as catching something before it falls, finishing eating first, beating some one (even if their not strong at all). Dorian gets highly depressed if someone claims he isn't "Amazing" or "Interesting". In so much that he'll ether get very very moody and emotional, or he'll just flick them off.

Devil Fruit: Gomu Gomu No Mi
type: Paramecian
effect: turns the user's body into rubber

Special Abilities:Extremely High Super Human Strength (Stronger then full grown giant), Super Human Endurance, Immense Super Human Speed, High Reflexes, Keen Eye sight (can spot things moving faster then usual)

Extremely High Super Human Strength:Dorian's Super Human Strength is nearly unmatched with most foes. His strength reaches the heights of being called the Strongest Man on the Grandline. Dorian's sheer brute strength is even noticed by some of the strongest of Marines. Major Payne, who is very strong him self. Recognized Dorian's physical ability even before how he was now. His Strength is that of what can be called the peek of strength. Dorian has enough strength to punch straight through thick steel. He's show so by Destroying two Marine Warships by punching straight through one of them, then through the other one.

Immense Super Human Speed:Dorian's speed is even more incredible then his Strength is. Dorian's own physical speed is insanely high. Dorian's been said to be able to keep up with an uses Soru plus something added onto it with little trouble. Dorian's Super Human speed was enough so that he out ran (ran away from) Vice Admiral Gideon, who is said to be the quickest Marine in the force, thank's to his devil fruit. (Gideon can move faster then Soru due to his Devil Fruit. Dorian can move equally as Soru.)


High Reflexes:Dorian has very sharp reflexes. Dorian's reflexes come from his training with Leon as a child. Leon would take out his razor sharp Saber and attempt to slice Dorian into pieces, with no restraints. Dorian's evaded every attack from Leon on account it was to save his life. In doing so, most if not all attacks are very unlikely to hit Dorian. Even sneak attacks seem to miss from time to time, or at least they don't take full effect as it would have if it hit head on. Dorian can with no problem dodge bullets (even though he doesn't have too) in a split second of noticing. But ONLY if he notices. He he's busy fighting some one else, his evasiveness drops dramatically.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):


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Bare Fist: Dorian's main and very first signature move. First seen used against the ever so powerful Leon Lexus. Its a basic punch. Now Enhanced by the Gomu Gomu No Mi, which can make it a long range attack.

Bare Bulldozer: Dorian will cross his arms and rush right through a crowd of enemies. This move can also be used to knock down Doors. This move is Enhanced by the Gomu Gomu No Mi, which makes what ever recoil damage he would take from ramming into a wall to nearly 0.

Bare Barrage: Dorian will begin to punch rapidly and randomly in one direction. This move is Enhanced by the Gomu Gomu no Mi to make it look like Thousands of fist flying towards you, hence a barrage.

Bare Drop Kick: Dorian will front flip, bringing his heel down, and slamming in it collision with his enemies head. Normally slamming the enemies head into the ground. This move was first seen against a man who was apart of an angry mod trying to kill Dorian.

Bare Palm: Dorian will open his hand and quickly push it against his enemy. Sending them flying backwards a good 3-5 feet. This move is used to make space between Dorian and his enemy. It is also used to avoid damage from on coming attacks if he is on the floor, it can be used to quickly get back on his feet.

Bare Knock Out: Dorian will muster up all the strength he has and delivers one uppercut to his enemy, then a strong right hook, attempting to knock them out. Mainly works on weaker enemies who piss him off.

Bare Human Arrow:Grabbing onto A Pole or any sturdy round pole like object. Dorian will then begin to swing his body around the pole. Causing his arm to wrap around it. When he is fully wrapped around the pole. He will let gravity take its course, and begin to spin around the pole, unraveling. Dorian will let his body be flung towards his target at an extremely high speed. Dorian will hold the palms of his feet together and held both his arms backwards. Looking like a human arrow!

1000 Spear Barrage: This move is exactly the same as Bare Barrage. Except his hands are not fist, they are spears. (Like if you were going to karate chop some one.) This move is so far Dorian's only new move that Leon has taught him that doesn't involve emotions.

Bare Frisbee: Dorian will take hold of any object that is flat and blunt. He will then stretch is arm out about 10-15 feet away from his body. The shorter the range, the more damage the attack will do. Dorian will then begin to spin around on one foot at a rapid pace, building momentum. He will then let go of the object he took hold of and send it flying towards his opponent. Like a Frisbe.

God's Bare Fist: Currently Dorian's strongest Move. Dorian will muster up every ounce of strength he has in his body. Thus, he will do a Bare Fist, but shout the word God in front of it to emphasize of powerful the punch is. This move is normally used to take down Giants or very strong Enemies.

Bare Fist Helicopter: Dorian starts off by grabbing hold of the persons shoulders or arms or even neck. Dorian will then pull him self over head and high into the sky. Dorian then began to spin his body around, causing his stretched out arms to twist and twist and twist. After a few more spins, Dorian then let his arms unwind. But from the bottom half. Dorian's opponent will then then began to spin with Dorian's arms unwinding. Dorian then lets his opponent spin round and round, so fast it looked like he/she was a twister! He will then let go of his opponent and let them go spinning into a random direction.

Bare Human Air Bag:Dorian will inhale a great amount of air and inflate him self like a Air Bag.

Bare Double Wammo: Dorian will do a double Bare Fist, sending it flying towards his opponent. Two Fist means double the damage.

Giant Mode:

Giant Mode is simply Dorian inflating his bones by biting his thumb and blowing into them. Although they increase in power, the speed of the attack is extremely slow. If hit by said attack, The damage is server.

Giant Bare Fist: This is Dorian's main and very first signature move, but in Giant Mode. It is normally used to take down very powerful enemies or Giants.

Giant Bare Palm: Similar to the normal move, but in Giant form. Dorian will open his hand and quickly push it against his enemy.

Giant Bare Drop Kick: Same as the normal one, but while he's gaining speed, he inflates his foot. Dorian will front flip, bringing his heel down, and slamming in it collision with his enemies head. Normally slamming the enemies head into the ground. But in Giant form he uses it to crush a large number of enemies or crush one single powerful one.

Giant Bare Barrage: The same as Bare Barrage except he'll equally transfer air into both his left and right arm and do the attack.

Boulder Mode:

Boulder Mode is the same as Giant Mode, but more stabilized. Dorian puts more focus into where transfers his air and makes sure it stays more packed together in his arm by stopping before sending the air into his arm. He holds the air in one place. When its built up, he sends it all into said part of his body. Thus, making the part much more dense, like a Boulder. The mode allows Dorian to punch things such as Swords, sharp edges, and points without being cut.

This mode can only be used for 3-5 post at a time. After that he must have a 10 post cool down.

Giant Boulder Bare Fist:A new improved version of Giant Bare Fist. Due to him having more control over his Giant Mode. Dorian this attack is strong enough to crush through solid bedrock with ease.

Giant Boulder Barrage: Dorian will preform Giant Bare Barrage, but with only one arm. Due to the extreme stress it is on Dorian's body to keep the air compacted in one part of his body during Boulder mode.

Giant Boulder Bare Drop Kick: A more improved Bare Drop Kick. Same effects as Boulder Bare Fist. Except Dorian uses his foot.


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Mach 1 Mode

Mach 1 mode is a mode where Dorian does all of his normal moves, but at 10x the speed of his normal attacks. His own physical speed also increases. (its 10x his normal speed, which equal the speed of Soru). His moves lessen in strength since he's not used to using this technique. The modes name comes from the speed of how fast a Jet can fly. Dorian cannot use any of his Giant Moves or Boulder Moves while using Mach 1 mode. Mach 1 Mode or (M1M for short) Is said to be able to catch even a Soru master off guard. Something moving faster then Soru would also probably have trouble dodging an Attack in M1M. Dorian has limited control of where his attacks go while in M1M because of how incredibly fast the moves are going. In so he is still training the attack. Dorian can do basic moves such as Bare Fist, Bare Palm, and Bare Drop Kick. But the rest of his moves are extremely if not impossible to pull of in M1M.

As of now Dorians gained more control over his Mach 1 Mode. Though still very hard to keep stable. Simple moves such a Bare Fist and Bare Palm and such Dorian can pull off perfectly while in this mode. And in multiple positions, such as upside down, back facing his enemy, or even during a complete front flip. Dorian's now focusing on mastering Mach Boulder Mode. Which is his current newest form of combat.

Dorian also has not be able to completely connect his more advanced regular techniques. Though he can use them, they are more prone to fail in the heat of the moment.

NewMach Boulder Mode:

Mach Boulder Mode is a mode where Dorian first activates his Mach 1 Mode, then inflates his arm into Boulder Mode. He skipped Giant Mode dude to is illogical movement. It was to soft and flexible to be used in Mach Mode period. So he focused mainly on stabalizing the Boulder mode due impact. The plus of this technique is that is extremely large and very hard to evade and suicide to defend against. Its very fast, not as fast as Mach 1 Mode normally, but twice as quick as Boulder Mode could normally go (about 35 mph tops due to the force of the attack moving with the large boulder. Its about 70 Mph now.) Dorian can use Mach Boulder Mode as much as he pleases. But once he ends the technique, his Mach 1 Mode is nearly unusable to a grave degree. Many things go wrong if attempts to use it. His sight may leave for who knows how long, reflexes will dull gravely, His speed cuts in half my 10x while in the mode. And his punches, although may be dead on. Will do literally no damage.

NewMach Meteor Punch: Simply Giant Boulder Bare Fist with an enchanted Mach 1 to increase speed. This attack is very easy to pull off in this mode.


NewMach Meteor Shower: This move is the same as Giant Boulder Barrage, although Dorian can do this move with ease. Its extremely destructive, nor can he see if he's hitting his opponent or not. The attacks also very hard to stop. So if some one were to counter attack. Dorian would have to jump upwards and let his fist fly backwards and hit his opponents from behind his back. Than again the only way to get around the attack is from behind.


NewMach Revolving Planets: This move sets up like Giant Boulder Barrage. Except Instead he'll being to twist his waist up to 50 times. Due to him being in Mach mode it only takes him a few seconds. Thus, Dorian will let him self unravel and his fist will begin to spin around rapidly. Crushing any, and everything in its path. This move can easily take out armies in no time.


NewFalling Sun:This is one of Dorians most devastating and lethal moves come to date. Dorian will do Mach Meteor Punch, but instead of instantly swinging it forward. Dorian will stretch his arm about up to 120 feet away from his body. Though in Mach mode it will take a few moments. Once its done, It will fly down towards his opponent in an insane speed. Thus, the sheer friction from the speed its going, it catches on fire. Thus his fist looks like a giant sun. Even though its a very lethal attack. If Dorian doesn't get rid of Boulder mode the instant it hits. It will start to melt his fist off his very body. In saying, Dorian uses this as a last resort.


Weapons/Items: Fighting Gloves

Goals:To become a strong man. To help his friends reach their dreams. To keep his friends together as long as possible.

New Goal: To Become the strongest Pirate Alive, to show the world that he's amazing.


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PostSubject: Re: Dorian D. Heron "Bare Fist Dorian"   Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:44 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dorian D. Heron "Bare Fist Dorian"   Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:04 am

I love Luffy with a passion..

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